Lil's Platinum Nuzlocke 01

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Yes, I'm starting a Nuzlocke. And making a comic out of it. This page is... eeeh... slow. I guess. I wanted to skip out all the tutorial stuff since it's so ridiculously long in this game. Takes forever. So everything is pacing too fast and a bit wonky and the boxes are all a bit samey. By page 3 it should settle down a bit and I can get into the groove of things. Also let me know if you want text for the speech or my handwriting. Style or practicality. I think that's the only thing I want feedback for at the moment.

RULES FOR THIS RUN!

1: If a pokemon faints, it is dead and should be released or boxed in the dead box.
2: Player must catch first pokemon in each area.
3: No duplicates clause.
4: Shiny clause.
5: Gift clause (any pokemon handed to you are allowed).
6: Items and pokemon center healing are allowed.
7: MERCY RULE: You have 3 chances to revive a dead pokemon, HOWEVER in each of those three chances, you must flip a coin to determine if they live or not. Heads they live, tails they stay dead. Once you flip the coin, there's no turning back, and you used up your chance.